I've got to say, Clay is definitely one of my favorites! However, one thing I've noticed is that a lot of Clay's dialogue, when it comes to network interactions, seems to fall a little flat. The words make sense! And the voice is there! Mostly, this is a personal opinion: it just doesn't quite show the same forcefulness Clay's dialogue in Revelations had. It feels like it's missing some spark, to me. I can't say so much in terms of logs-- I haven't caught up on any in the game itself, and obviously haven't logged with Clay.
I also have some recommendations that might help a little bit, especially in terms of trying to give life to that dialogue. Developmental psychology research might definitely help that. Also looking into behavioral science and abnormal psychology has done a lot for me. I personally think it would do a lot for you, as well, considering who Clay is!
If I haven't been clear or concise, let me know!
I forgot to add: Nero science is also a good point! I didn't think about that until much later, and it's definitely an interesting topic. I still hope it's interesting and helpful.
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Date: 2012-04-06 09:03 pm (UTC)I also have some recommendations that might help a little bit, especially in terms of trying to give life to that dialogue. Developmental psychology research might definitely help that. Also looking into behavioral science and abnormal psychology has done a lot for me. I personally think it would do a lot for you, as well, considering who Clay is!
If I haven't been clear or concise, let me know!
I forgot to add: Nero science is also a good point! I didn't think about that until much later, and it's definitely an interesting topic. I still hope it's interesting and helpful.